How does my story sound?

So my beautiful story... Hn. Well someone obviously wants their ego waxed and polished... And maybe I would have too, were it not for the rather unappealing mass of literary cliches littering your description. I mean come on: evil wizard? Orphan girl? Was any of this ever actually inspired, or are you merely trying to push off your fantasies on the rest of the world? Whoever your agent is, you'd better hold on to him/her, and hold on tight, coz if what I've read so far is any indicator of your latent talent, the man/woman is-by all rights-a miracle worker...