Lorette Niece
Tuesday, August 2, 2011
B&A: Opinions of the beginning to my story?
it needs quite some work but it looks as if it could be REALLY REALLY good. check how you divide your paragraphs(you do it a LOT at the beginning and some other places where it doesn't need to be separated) and your comma use.
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